Reflection on the feedback:
I realized that I wasn't taking it as serious as I probably should and was holding back from fully going in on this given assignment. I appreciate that feedback often, as it helps me focus in on what I need to change and sharpen the proverbial knife on any given assignment.
What did I change:
I took a longer time writing this version of the elevator pitch and included more pauses and effective aspects of communication to attract the listener to want to hear more about the product. While maintaining a level of professionalism, I also wanted to add elements of comparability that everyone could relate to, which I hope they see in this third edition of the elevator pitch.
