Hey man, once again, it’s nice to put a face to these blogs and finally see my group. In my opinion your blog was very presented, the lighting wasn’t too bad, I know it’s hard to get it perfect. Your body language was very interesting, your pronunciation and facial expressions were awesome, but I felt like you were reading this from a paper by the camera. You were very well-informed presenting your opinions for your idea. If I was to do anything different it would be to at least wear a collar shirt. Overall that was a nice pitch. I know it’s hard to memorize all this stuff, but it’s part of the learning curve. Looking forward to the next one.
Hey Andrew, I thought this was a pretty good attempt for your first elevator pitch. You did sound a little quiet in your speech, which could be mistaken for not having confidence in your product or service. It was a little difficult to understand all of the things you were saying in that video, maybe because of the audio set up you have currently. The word choice is really spot on, and the message is great, you just need to get the non-verbal aspects a little cleaned up. Overall though, I thought you did a great job on this pitch and I am looking forward to see the improvements on the next one.
Your presentation had a consistent tone that was easy to follow, though it could use some enthusiasm. Maybe utilize some numbers and a clear business model in the future. This pitch did appeal to potential consumers and possibly made some people realize they could actually use this product, that wouldn't have noticed their need before. Overall you understood your idea and did a good job of conveying information about it to the audience.
Hey man, once again, it’s nice to put a face to these blogs and finally see my group. In my opinion your blog was very presented, the lighting wasn’t too bad, I know it’s hard to get it perfect. Your body language was very interesting, your pronunciation and facial expressions were awesome, but I felt like you were reading this from a paper by the camera. You were very well-informed presenting your opinions for your idea. If I was to do anything different it would be to at least wear a collar shirt. Overall that was a nice pitch. I know it’s hard to memorize all this stuff, but it’s part of the learning curve. Looking forward to the next one.
ReplyDeleteHey Andrew, I thought this was a pretty good attempt for your first elevator pitch. You did sound a little quiet in your speech, which could be mistaken for not having confidence in your product or service. It was a little difficult to understand all of the things you were saying in that video, maybe because of the audio set up you have currently. The word choice is really spot on, and the message is great, you just need to get the non-verbal aspects a little cleaned up. Overall though, I thought you did a great job on this pitch and I am looking forward to see the improvements on the next one.
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ReplyDeleteYour presentation had a consistent tone that was easy to follow, though it could use some enthusiasm. Maybe utilize some numbers and a clear business model in the future. This pitch did appeal to potential consumers and possibly made some people realize they could actually use this product, that wouldn't have noticed their need before. Overall you understood your idea and did a good job of conveying information about it to the audience.
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